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The storyline is good, though it gives off a cutesy feel vs a dramatic action story. One comment though and this is just a pet peeve of mine. I also dislike seeing “boo-hoo” as sound notes. When I read it, I also hear fake crying. A simple “ah” and a whoosh of breath exhale drawn is more dramatic than a boo hoo. Just saying.

oh so now that your favorite son was killed, you come to get the reject you keep in the basement. Great father you are!

her incompetence also got him killed so he has the right to be angry there but he took it too far with since he only teamed up to get in her pants making him loose all rights in the argument.

i like the giant middle finger he gave the god of death. tragic moment but satisfying to see his plans fvcked up.

Translation is kind of… off? Flow of conversations and word choice just doesn't fit characters sometimes or is it just me?

Poor red head he is just looking for his mom lol