Anything in this story may sense

I just read my comment and see i made any mistakes well whatever i doubt anyone gonna actually read it

Story is like a maze created by 2 year old there is no direction it's all over the place and that's a underestimate it's even worse I read it till here in hopes it would improve b,coz it was enjoyable so i wanted a proper ending but is that too much to ask for The biggest mistake is mc relationships He first went after the girl who was the new body wife for many chapter and when he was close to achieving it he just divorced her with the of (i am dead she alive me being around only gonna harm or some shit like that) But I am more upset with second one she my favourite character in this series And her relationship with the mc didn't even begun even no confession no kiss no dates even in the last chapter they only gone out for walk for the first and it seems it will finally have progress but author just end it Author probably got lost in the maze in himself created and didn't know what to do anymore

Lol the way he calmed the book by howling

Lol old man

Yea no what the hell just happened to the mc

So why does this say the end?

So stupid

this story is so....fxcked

ok, wow. this went downhill bad, i dont like him anymore. trash